*Editor’s Note: Learning about persuasive writing, Mike Wonderly's second grade class at Hurricane Deck Elementary in Sunrise Beach has written letters to the community on the Camdenton R-III School District's proposed bond issue which is on the April 2 ballot. The students practiced choosing a viewpoint, writing a topical sentence, giving reasons and supporting details for their point of view and writing a conclusion. See more opinions on LakeNewsOnline.com
I would like a new school for the following three reasons.
First we have cracks and holes in the walls. If they were patched it would be better. If we had more spase we would not be packed like grapes and scooshed together. Last, are gym is little and we bump into each other.
Now you can see why I want a new school because we are out of room.
Your friend, Ryan
We would like to have a new Hurricane Deck Elementary for th fawlling three reasons.
Frist it would be nice to have a bigger gym that I can play basickball and tag. Next, we need a new lunch room becuse it is cramint and it takes 40 minines to clean it. We have a gymacafetorium. Finly I want a new scool with more room so it's not cramint. Cleary you can see that I want a new Hurricane Deck Elementary.
Getting a bigger school would be nice. I will tell you why we could use it with these following three reasons. Frist, we are all cramed in like blackberrys in a box. We all bump heads once or twice a day in the classroom. Next, the cooks barely have room. If anthor person is going through they both have to turn sidway. Finally, the P.E. teacher works in a hole in a wall. It's as big as a landing spot for a Helicopter or a bunny's cage with a door and walls just without the little stairs.
I beleave you see that I would love to have a new school.
Sincerely, Kayle R. Stewart
We would like to have a new school for the following reasons. I hope we get more computrs. We only have four for 26 kids.
Next, I would like a new gem because we eat lunch in the gem. It takes a long time to clen up the food so we can play.
Your fren, Preston
Page 2 of 6 - I would like a new school for the following three reasons. First I would not like to be crowded in this room. Next I would like a bigger room because I feel like a pickle in a jar. Last, I would like a bigger play ground. Clerly you can see that I want a new school.
I Wesley Ballard want to have a new scool. We are so cramd like my classroom. And my gym teacher, he works in a hole. And guess what ... no tax increase. What a couincidince. Clearly you can see I whant you to vote yes.
I would not like a new school for the following reasons.
First my most precious memories are here at this school. Like the time we made Cristmas ornaments out of shapes. Next reison, our play ground is great the way it is write now. And really fun. A group of us alway play tag. Third lunch room. You see most people think that the lunch room is crowded. But to me it warm and cosy. Clearly you can see that I would not like a new school.
Your friend, Christian
We would like to have a new Hurricane Deck school for the following three reasons. First, it is all cramped. We don't have enough room for books. We don't have enough room for us because if we go in a place we are all smooshed together. Next, it would look way way prettyer and we will have a bigger education and more kids. Plus we will have more friends. Finnaly, we will be able to have no cracks in the wall. Plus I don't want cracks in the wall. They always bug me. Clearly you can see why I want a bigger hurricane deck school.
Sinceraly, Bailey H.
We would like a new H.D.E. school for the three following reasons. First we need more students to give more educations to children. We need more children to have more brainstorming in the class. Next, there are alot of cracks in the walls, and it scares me because bugs could come out like spiders and other bugs. Finally, we are all cramed in the school, because it's a small school with alot of children.
Clearly, you can see that we need a new Hurricane Deck Elementary.
Love with peace, Michelle
We would like to have a new school for the following three reasons. First, we all want to have a new playground and a bigger one because it makes me feel crowded by how small it is and I need more space to play so I don't feel crowded in the playground. Next, all of this stuff in the classrooms are getting really old and we need new stuff in our classrooms so we feel like were in a better place than the old place.
Page 3 of 6 - Finally, we would use this school and treat it better than it was treated before and the whole school would like it better and I would also do the same thing that I wrote above. I have clearly proven to you that I want you to vote yes to our new school.
Sicerly, Peyton Enler
My school Hurricane Deck Elmentry whold like to be remodeld for the folloing three resons. First, our lunch room is crowded and the lunch lady's can't go through thar little room without bumping in to some budy. Next, my P.E. teacher is stuck in pretty much a hole in the wall. He is like tunafish sin a can. Finlly, my class room is so small we can only fit one more student. We all ways bump in to each other.
Clearly you can see I whant you to vote yes on the bond issue.
This well not raises taxes.
Sincerly, Savanna L.
We would like to have a new Hurricane Deck school for the following three reasons. First, I want like to make new friends becouse I don't have that many friends. Next, I want more books to read at home becouse I love read books. Finally, I want to play in the gmy I want a beger gmy becouse play more games. Cleary you can see I want a new school please vote for yes. becouse it is so we looded in hear.
We would love have a new HD for the following three reasons. Frist, we all would like a biger lunch room. Because we are all cramed in and it takes fourdy minit's to clean the lunch room. And it takes up P.E. time for some kids. Next we would have a much biger gym for sports and P.E. I mostly would like it because I won't have to go to Oak Ridge to play basket ball.
Finally man more kids would get a much better education in are new HD school and the education we get helps us with life. Clearly you can see I would love have a new school and a bigger one too. This bond issue will not raise taxes!!
Sinerely, Kayle R. Stewart
I wish sto get a new school for the following three reasonse. First, I don't want Mr. Leighty to work in a hole. He has a small office, a realy small ofice. It's like a closet! Next, I want the cooks to pass peopel when ther cooking are food. Finaly I want kids to have more frends to play with. Cleary you can see I want a new school so the teachers and kids to have room.
Page 4 of 6 - Love, Corgan
We would like to have a new Hurricane Deck school for the following reasons. First, I would like a new music room. Because, I would like to have a stage or were we could have like the whole entire school can go in thier for plays. Next, I would like a new Gym. Because the cooks might get distracted while we are yelling or if coach is yelling at us. So, it is not fair to them. Finally, I want a new classroom. Because we always like bump heads all the time like when goats head butts. And Mr. Wonderly dosen't have that much room. Clearly, you can see that we would like a new Hurricane Deck school.
Please vote yes for the new school for the following three reasons.
First, I want a new school because it's so crammed! I feel like a goldfish in a stuffed aquarium. And we have 26 kids in a our class!
Next, I want a new school because I want more special classes. I'm planning to be a marine biologist. So I want animal classes. Finally I want more education. I think it's not fair that we'r getting less done than planned. My teacher is great but we'r always bumping into each other. That's a delema, because it makes things slower.
Now you can clearly see why I want a new Hurricane Deck school.
We would like to have a new sochool for the following three reasons.
Frst, no tax requird and the sochool will be gigentik!!! Next, are sochool is very small. I fell like a batafish in a jar in the sochool and Mr. Leighty don't have to be in a hole cramd in the hole. Last, I will more education and more rooms for pepole in the sochool and more books and a education!!! Cleary you can see I want a new sochool.
Love, Bailey M.
I want a new Hurricane Deck elementary school for the following three reasons. First I need some education and coach is needing some room in the gym and he also don't get very much time to teach anything because he's in the cafeatira. Next I want a new playground because I'm tired of the old one because it's not that fun. Last were all cramed in here like one thousand bears cramed up in a cave because come on there is twenty-six kids. Cleary you can see that I would love to have a new Hurricane Deck elementary school.
Page 5 of 6 - Love, Spirit Dawn
We would like a new Hurrcane Deck school for the for the following three reasons. We would get more books and a bigger library so I can get more reading mintes. We would let kids get a bigger education. Are class gets cramped. We hardly can move. Are class has 26 kids. Clearly you can see I want to have a new Hurrcane Deck school. It won't raise taxes.
We would like to have a new Hurricane Deck scool for the folling three reasens. First I wunt new boocks because I do not have a lot of boocks to git beder at reading. Next I want a big classroom because we are clumped like spagetti and met balls. Last I wunt a new flat playgrand. Because evey time I shot a basckit it rollsdown the hill. Clear you can see I want a new scool.
Most of us wunt the new scool for the following three reasons. First, we would like two wnew playgrawns so the big kids and the litler kids can be seperaded.
next, we would have a biger lunch room. The lunch room would be nicer and neter. Finally, we would have a biger gym and have mer room in the gym for sports. Clearly you can see thet I want a new H.D.E. scool.
We would like a new Hurricane Deck Elementry for the three following reasons. First, are room is too crowded. We can't have our own little space with our desks because are classroom is like rolypolys in a rock! There are only four computers! So if there are four pepole there already they would be filled up. Next, we want a bigger gymnasium so mr. leady gets a bigger office because his is like a bowl! And when we have asemblys are parents don't get too come all the time. So if we had a bigger gymasium there would be enough room for grandparents too. And we want a bigger music room so we could have more room for more instruments. And a bigger art room so pour mrs. carnahan deson't have too clean out all the drours. Clearly you can see we want a new Hurricane Deck Elementry.
P.S. no tax increase
We would like to have a new Hurricane deck school for the following three reasens. I would be happy to not be crampt up in this room so we need more spas. Next, we need more coputers so more kids can work. Finllay, there would be more techers and more childrin and more classes as you can see we are going to have a new school soon I hope.
Page 6 of 6 - Youer friend, Hailey Rickitts
We would like to have a new school for the following three reasons. Frist, becouse I do not like being crowded. So we do not bump people. Next, I want more friends so we have more fun. Finaly, I want the play grownd much biger so we can have more fun. Cleary, you can see that it would be beter with a new school. thank you community. we love you community. your the best.